Dude theres a lot of hurting people in the world so people can totally dig the lyrics of this song on a sunny day…even fiend for them. Dude I just checked your myspace and you are sooo talented man…truly a real musician! The only thing I feel like isnt up to par is your vocals man…you go for a sound that matches the music but your voice just doesnt pull it off…you have the effort but not the right voice…I bet if you tried singing different you’d nail perfection. Great stuff!
actually this is one of the best original songs i’ve heard on youtube. of course you’re not able to make it really shine here, but i can hear there’s something in it. great chord progressions and a strong melody. would like to hear it with a pro arrangement and everything.
If this doesn’t help anyone, atleast it was funny. I like your ideas though Jonathan.. i’ll try out your theory when I get home from work 😛 im in the middle of writers block central.. totally bites and its been like 5 weeks.
yes, you should upload all 68 of them lol. I know i’d like to hear them! Original songs are awesome to hear. It’s cool to think too that at the moment that they’re up for the public to hear, not everyone will hear. Not everyone will listen, and not everyone will care. Those are the best times for a song I think. Anything after that is just pressure. I guess. But yeah, upload them!
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jamlimited3 and anyone else who is interested, 2 years later,
http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/jonathansiemandwesclarya
Maybe someday I can actually get enough money, doubtable, to record more.
Otherwise, I’m always playing my guitar and making original songs.
You’re very original. I love it!
Dude theres a lot of hurting people in the world so people can totally dig
the lyrics of this song on a sunny day…even fiend for them. Dude I just
checked your myspace and you are sooo talented man…truly a real musician!
The only thing I feel like isnt up to par is your vocals man…you go for a
sound that matches the music but your voice just doesnt pull it off…you
have the effort but not the right voice…I bet if you tried singing
different you’d nail perfection. Great stuff!
I have 68 original songs. I should probably upload them,huh?
I use the exact same proceedure. Over years of trial and error I found it.
Check out my page.
I like your advice about using gibberish before coming up with the final
lyrics. It’s a good trick!
actually this is one of the best original songs i’ve heard on youtube. of
course you’re not able to make it really shine here, but i can hear there’s
something in it. great chord progressions and a strong melody. would like
to hear it with a pro arrangement and everything.
If this doesn’t help anyone, atleast it was funny. I like your ideas though
Jonathan.. i’ll try out your theory when I get home from work 😛 im in the
middle of writers block central.. totally bites and its been like 5 weeks.
yes, you should upload all 68 of them lol. I know i’d like to hear them!
Original songs are awesome to hear. It’s cool to think too that at the
moment that they’re up for the public to hear, not everyone will hear. Not
everyone will listen, and not everyone will care. Those are the best times
for a song I think. Anything after that is just pressure. I guess. But
yeah, upload them!
The melody in your songs are just sounds AMAZING…do you have any music I
can download to check out your skills?